This article first appeared on Writer Unboxed
By
Erica Verrillo
You’ve
finally completed your book. You’ve had it critiqued – brutally –
and done more revisions than you care to count. Your proofreader has
made sure there’s not a single error in the entire manuscript, and
now you are confident that your work is ready to be published. What
next? Obviously, you need an agent. So, after searching AgentQuery
for agents representing your genre, and consulting Jeff Herman’s
Guide
and the most recent Writer’s
Digest,
you are sitting down to compose the perfect query letter.
Stop.
You’ve skipped some steps.
Before
you can even think about contacting an agent, there are several
important questions you must be able to answer. Why? Because, if an
agent calls you, she or he will ask them. (I know this from painful
personal experience.) You must
be prepared to reply with compelling answers.
This
short quiz will tell you if you are ready to take on the publishing
industry.
1)
Have you written a one-page summary of your novel? Do you have a
“hook,” an intriguing sentence that will draw your audience into
your story, for example: “A man wakes up one morning to discover
that every single person he knows is trying to kill him – even his
wife and kids – and he has no idea why.” Can you keep your
agent’s full attention for three minutes while you describe
(verbally, or in writing) the rest of the story? In short, if your
agent asks, “What’s your book about?” can you sell it? 20
points
2)
Have you researched your market? Who will buy your book? Agents rely
on numbers because publishers do, so you have to be able to say, with
accuracy, how many people are in your demographic. (Hint, “adults”
is not a demographic. College-educated, married women with small
children is a demographic.) 20 points
3)
What is your competition? Your agent will want to know the titles,
authors, publishers, and year of publication of other popular books
in your genre (or field). There are two reasons for identifying your
competition: 1) You have to prove that there is already
a market for your kind of book, and 2) You have to prove that your
book is better or different. (Give specifics.) 20 points
4)
How will you reach your market? Do you have a platform? You may
think that marketing is the job of your publisher, and it is. But
agents must convince editors that not only is there a market for your
book, but that you have the credentials, and visibility, to promote
your work. In the old days, BI (before internet), this was done
through book tours, signings, and talks. You can still do those
things, but what agents really want to know is how many people are
reading your blog/website. (Publishers are fond of the number 10,000,
so it helps to be able to say, “My blog/website has had 10,000+
page views.”) If you have published other books, how many were
sold? Do people in your field or niche know who you are? Do you have
any famous contacts who can give you endorsements? 20 points
5)
Do you, in Michael Larsen’s immortal words, “harbor a consuming
lust for success,” and are you “irresistibly driven to do
whatever it takes to make your books sell?” Your agent will expect
you go the whole nine yards, and to comply – eagerly – with
whatever sports metaphors your publisher will hurl at you. This is no
time to be a shrinking violet. You are going to have to step up to
the mat and bat a thousand. 20 points
If
you scored a hundred, congratulations! You are ready to contact an
agent. If you answered, “I don't need to do that,” “I can't do
that,” or “Huh?,” to any of the above questions, then get to
work!
How
to score 100 on the test
1)
Fortunately, there are a many good books about pitches and proposals.
I recommend Michael Larsen's How
to Write a Book Proposal.
(This book is also useful for fiction.) Larsen really understands the
publishing industry, so you can rely on his advice. To get the hang
of preparing pitches, start with a pitch for a book you haven't
written. If your one-sentence hook can make your friends want to
read the book, then move on to pitching your own work.
2)
To determine your demographic, check the Alexa ranking for every
well-trafficked website related to your genre or field. Alexa
includes a demographic profile for high-ranking sites. Identify all
the organizations or groups that might have an interest in your
topic. What is their membership?
3)
Amazon is one of the greatest research tools of all time. To identify
your competition, look up the bestsellers in your genre. What books
are on the top 100 lists? Who publishes them? Use the “look inside”
feature to compare those books with your own. (Google Books also
allows generous previews.)
4)
Building a platform takes time. But you can accumulate 10,000 page
views in a few months if you blog about interesting topics – and
if you do some social networking. Advertise your blog posts on Facebook, Goodreads, and LinkedIn groups. You can precycle your posts
on blogs that get more traffic than yours. You can recycle your
blogs, as well, on sites that accept reprints. Look up the "Top 50
blogs" in your genre on Blogrank and read them! High-ranking blogs
invariably contain lots of insider tips, trends, news, and industry
gossip.
5) Getting
writers to harbor a consuming lust for anything other than writing
is a tall order. Writers are an idealistic lot, deeply committed to
exploring the human soul while crouched in front of a keyboard in a
dim, unheated garret. Before you contact an agent, you need to go
through a metamorphosis – from idealistic writer, to practical
businessman. When your agent asks if you will do anything
to sell your book (mine did), there can only be one answer.
Hi, Erica! I found your site on Book Blogs. I'm a blogger, not an author, but I have always hoped to write a book someday. I just need to screw up the courage to GET STARTED! :-) You give great tips here. I'm now following via GFC and Networked Blogs.
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P.S. I'm going to check out your MG novels - I'm always looking for books to read along with my kids!
You have some great Ideas. Too bad I am not ready to publish again. Maybe in six and eight months.
ReplyDeleteHas anyone told you today that you're an excellent writer, Erica? You truly are gifted, ma'am. Finding your blog has lifted my day.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouragement, smart humour (Canadian spelling, eh?) and hilarious photo in this article detailing the 'insane' stuff germane to a scribe's dodgy domain. I've got a better picture of the road now and am seriously thinking of taking up gardening. Yet who knows whether I can be truly free of the big, white straitjacket unless I give it a go. Perhaps the advice of an old English pastor to his preaching students is applicable here: "If you are by any means able to do anything else in life - do that! But if you CANNOT do anything else but [write] then God speed and good luck." - Charles Spurgeon.
Thank you, Chris. As a matter of fact, several people have recently told me that I am a gifted writer, followed by the sentence "I am sure you will be able to find representation elsewhere." It warms my heart to know you are also thinking of taking up gardening. (My tomatoes were HUGE this year. It's all the rain! And the muttering. I've heard CO2 gives plants an extra boost.) God speed and good luck!
DeleteWow, Erica! I just discovered your site. So much good information, and totally accessible. Thank you!
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